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Where are you?
Night and day trying to find,
trying to see,
trying to say.

I've drawn you a lot of times,
but you're not on my drawings.

I've painted you wasting my eyes,
but I can't get the colours of your feelings.

Tell me what I have to do to know you,
to get a bit of ur love,
to get more than a dream,
to get your nose rubbing my cheeks,
to get your hands
drawing your name on my lips,
to get ur fingers giving shape to my face,
stroking my loneliness,
stroking my fears.

Paint a star on my forehead,
the sun on my chest,
the sky on my eyes
and wings on my arms.

Let me fly with you
where you live.
Show me the world.
Show me the wind.
Show me your soul.
Show who I am.
Show who you are.

They told me I'd find you,
but it seems too far.
It seems I've lost my voice
and you can't hear,
It seems I've done all that I could
and you never existed
and you'll never exist.

But I still have a hope.
If you're there, my unknown love,
You have here a poor heart,
you have here a lil song,
you have here a man,
a man that cries,
a man that feels.
but a man that would die
for a bit of your life,
for a lil touch of your lips.

Don't let my soul consumed in my mind,
in my pain,
in my dreams.
You can get a lot of things but without true love
everything is like a canvas painted in grey.
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AWickedShade Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Jag trodde en gång finns det alltid en sann kärlek till varje människa ....... och allt vi bör göra är att hitta dem .....
men efter att ha fallit flera gånger för fel person ....... efter flera hjärtat pauser ....... Jag tror aldrig det längre ......

I will not translate it ....... but this is a very beautiful poem :heart:....... you really have talent in everything......
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011  Student General Artist
Tack så mycket, min vän!
Jag är glad att du tycker om mitt arbete.
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AWickedShade Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Allt för dig min vän. du har en riktig talang!
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011  Student General Artist
Tack så mycket :hug:
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AWickedShade Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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chedo18 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2011
Perfect stalker poem. Its beautiful!
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2011  Student General Artist
Stalker? :confused: Btw Thanks so much, I'm glad you like it :thanks:
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chedo18 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011
Your welcom! ^^
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TriciaS Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011
Beautiful!.....:clap:A poet as well!!!
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011  Student General Artist
Hehe! Thanks so much! :aww:
I'm glad u like it :thanks:
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TriciaS Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011
When you do a book of your pictures....You could haveyour poetry in it as well......and all your tips about drawing ....and painting!!!!!:iconhappybounceplz:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2011  Student General Artist
good idea :D I could do a book of my work with explanations weeeeeeeee ..good idea thanks! :glomp:
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JaneDoe91 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011
Wow, you just keep on surprising me. I'm in love with you drawing, really like you paintings, i'm a bit jealous on you're 3d max work, wish i could draw people just as correct as you. And now, you blow me away with this... This amazing poem.

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See the path cut by the moon, for you to walk on.
Pearl Jam
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011  Student General Artist
Awwes! Thank you very much!
I'm really glad you like this poem.:thanks:
Sometimes I write :aww:
You're so nice :nod:
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Ideha Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011
Hola, Marcelo. Soy...Petigoper, no sé si recuerdas; te envié una nota hace unos meses sobre mi indecisión acerca de mi futuro.
He leído tu poema y me he dado cuenta de que hay demasiadas cosas por amar, tantas que el amor se vuelve inaprensible. Espero que te guste mi galería, ya que por lo demás el arte para mi significa inactividad.
Un saludo y gracias otra vez por tu talento intachable.
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student General Artist
Hola, claro que me acuerdo, incluso te he dado una llama pero no sabía que eras tú. Espero que estés bien. :hug:
Gracias por leer mis cosas. :aww::thanks:
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Ideha Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011
XD Aunque no lo creas estoy haciendo varias cosas a la vez y no es tan fácil como había pensado.
Gracias a ti por seguir receptivo a mis comentarios :hug:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student General Artist
Sería interesante saber qué cosas haces, igual y es bonito contar un poco o al menos las cosas bonitas :aww:
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Ideha Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011
¿En serio? me halagas mucho. No es ningún misterio (lo sospechabas ¿a que si?). Tampoco me urge contártelo todo ahora...pero teniendo en cuenta mi depresión, mi profunda depresión, tal vez no sea grosero apurar la copita esta vez: Hago de todo, pero gratis todavía. Lo bueno es lo que tengo: honguitos de los bonitos, y también una silla haciendo presión debajo. Jajaja (mi sentido del humor es muy apreciado por los rojos).
¡Que no me des las gracias, que no se lleva yaaa!
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student General Artist
honguitos? :confused:
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Ideha Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011
Jajaja: lo saqué de un libro de recetas, perdona. Me gusta cocinar, así de vulgar.
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student General Artist
cuál es tu especialidad? en platillos :D
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catalina-wingstorm Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011
How beautiful! You are so amazing! My heart leaps at reading your poetry. It is like you have stepped into my soul and written what you found there!
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student General Artist
That's so nice from you. :aww:
I'm glad you like it. :huggle:
I feel honoured, my friend! :meow:
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catalina-wingstorm Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011
I like it very much! Thank you for sharing these beautiful works! :)
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student General Artist
:huggle:
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silmeenkeli Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You have a wonderful personality :tighthug: Hope You find what You're searching for^^
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks so much! :thanks::meow:
Well, I wrote it from different experiences.
But of course we'll always trying to find a true love :aww:
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silmeenkeli Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
And our expectations changes all the time till you come to the point when you realize that you're just saving yourself from madness(cause being an artist often means having veeeery complicated personality :rofl:
or maybe it's just me:XD:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011  Student General Artist
no, no, it's true, normally I live in conflict with myself, but lately I'm finding a balance according to the things I wanna reach with my technique :aww: hehe!you're not crazy , no worries :d
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silmeenkeli Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:aww:
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zyera5 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I really like it.
Very beautiful.
<3
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you very much! :iconeweplz::aww::thanks:
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zyera5 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:heart:
:)
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student General Artist
:iconkirbyplz:
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mj-magic Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
such sweet and beautiful words! :love:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks a lot!:thanks:
I'm glad you like it! :meow:
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mj-magic Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
aww.. you're so welcome! :heart:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student General Artist
:iconawwplz:
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converse-17 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I swear I was about to cry! I love this so much! Thank you for taking the words right out of my mouth :heart:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Student General Artist
Awwes! That means a lot to me, that u could have strong feelings about it! :thanks: Thanks a lot! :hug:
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converse-17 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
it's my pleasure really, no problem. Thank you for writing it! :hug:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student General Artist
:hug:
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BloodMoonEquinox Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Student General Artist
Aww! :love: It's amazing how you can make poems with so many images and strong feelings! :) :heart: Great job! :clap:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Student General Artist
I'm glad u like the images! :meow:
Thanks a lot for ur support! :huggle:
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hieronimusbosch1 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aww!! niceee.
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you so much! :aww::thanks:
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MarsSu Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011
AWWWWWWWWWw this is so sweet!!! I think the poem is saying "I want a hug" so here's a hug :tighthug: :XD:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Student General Artist
Awwwwwww! That's so nice from you! :huggle::thanks:
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MarsSu Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011
You welcome!!!! :iconsweethugplz:
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