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Give me the peace of your lips.
Feed me with the colour of your eyes.
Take my hands with your heart
And heal my life from head to my feet.

Hug me that tight that I can forget my faults.
Repeat my name to remember who I am.
Paint my face with the brushstrokes of your hair
Each time you rub my lips with your mouth,
Each time you smile,
Each time you love.

Slide the sweetness of your soul
And burn my anxiety.
Give a meaning to my existence
To don't miss you 'till death
Each time you go,
Each time your image flies out of me,
out of my mind.

'Cause since you left me
I don't distinguish what is alive and what is empty
Since you went beauty is nothing, beauty is pain.

Without you this world is a bad joke,
a big frame without painting.

The day you died I hated the butterflies
And the flowers were sign of loss.
Nobody could explain 'why',
Nobody heard my voice.
Nobody understood what I did.
Nobody understood what I said.
Nobody knew how I lost my way.
Nobody asked.
Nobody cared.
Nobody saw
the day I lost you,
the day I lost my faith.
When I wrote this I was listening Yiruma - "Kiss the Rain"
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I was very disappointed about something I heard and other feelings moved me to write this.
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BloodMoonEquinox Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
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BloodMoonEquinox Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Student General Artist
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Student General Artist
didn't work =P
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BloodMoonEquinox Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Student General Artist
-.- grrrr!!!
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Better??? XD
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Chumiquinhawis Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
qué pasó?
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Es sólo un poema :D jeje!
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Hiro-Akemi Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
other than the your shortened to ur, this is a beautiful piece.
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks a lot!
I'll correct that btw :thanks:
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Hiro-Akemi Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Welcome
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Bullcross Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Finally something worth faving! Good job!
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you very much!
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hayakuzhou Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
lose myself in your beautiful pain
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student General Artist
:hug: Thanks so much!
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monikata Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
So sad and beautiful
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks so much for taking time to read it
and thanks, I'm glad u think so :hug:
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MOVINGPICTURES1981 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
Aww it so sad :cries:
Good job :clap:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconhug1plz: Thanks a lot for reading!
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MOVINGPICTURES1981 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
Aww no problem :huggle:
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Wickedsick008 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
This is beautiful and easy to relate to. Well done.
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you so much!
So nice from you to read it :thanks:
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Saeleth Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
So sad... :(
Beautiful!
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student General Artist
:hug: :thanks:
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Saeleth Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
:huggle:
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hoplessromantic18 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ouch yet again.. straight to the heart..nice..
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks so much! :thumbsup:
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hoplessromantic18 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
no prob, bec it's real good :)
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mj-magic Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So beautiful and so sad... :heart: :huggle:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you so much, my friend! :huggle:
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mj-magic Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're very welcome Marcello! :huggle:
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readingrabbit Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
Everything I feel right now, actually. XD

Beautifully written, Marcello!
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student General Artist
wow! It is so nice from u to share that :hug:
Thanks a lot for reading :aww:
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dragonaki Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Big hug :cuddle:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconawwplz::hug::thanks:
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sallymalene Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
beautifully written as always! :rose:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student General Artist
Tak, sode! You're so nice! :huggle::thanks:
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sallymalene Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You to, Marcello! :tighthug:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student General Artist
:hug:
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AWickedShade Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh :(
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student General Artist
:(
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heartinart Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So nice! I hope everything is ok with you!!!
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student General Artist
Aww! Thanks so much, my friend!
Yes, everythign is ok :aww::thanks:
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heartinart Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:)
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