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There you are
sitting down, trying to say much
and saying nothing,
you look at me
and I don't know what to say to dry your tears.

You avoid me
and look at me again.
I hold my face to don't fall.
And you press your lips
'cause you don't wanna hurt me.

I never abandoned you,
just love dies
when you have no place where to hold.

I never left you alone,
you were whom forgot
past doens't exist and future is no real.

No, I didn't play with you;
but I look at your face and you're not convinced.
What do you want me to do, rebuilding everything?
Are you going to love me more than you didn't love me?

And you cry and keep silence.
And you wonder why I don't cry
And I know it
I know a broken heart doesn't cry,
broken and hard, that got tired of looking at your eyes waiting,
tired of thinking: "maybe she'll change".
Maybe I would have to change
Maybe we would have,
maybe..maybe
maybe nothing!

Forgive me, maybe tomorrow it won't hurt that much.
I know you won't kiss me or hug me for last time.
I just don't wanna think of how much I'm gonna miss you,
'cause then I'd really cry.

And when days pass, while I take your pics out of my bedside table
maybe I'll remember you, maybe I'll need you,
perhaps I'll love you...
I'll love you again.
Actually I wrote it in Spanish but tried to do a translation here.
I was listening again Yiruma-Kiss the Rain"
[link]

Many experiences around of this.
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cat12553 Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
D'awwwwwww! It's just such a sweet n emotional poem! :D
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BloodMoonEquinox Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
:(
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BloodMoonEquinox Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Student General Artist
:icondw817bearsadplz:
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Hiro-Akemi Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think you should use a beta reader/editor before posting the final product, however; the emotion of the piece still shows through.

I agree with a previous commentor, shorting your words like picture to pics or because to 'cuz cheapens the poetry of the piece.
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Aww! Thanks so much for the tips, well, sure, maybe I'm not that sensitive about it cuz to me the sound just mean what I have in mind but for sure for native Enlgish speakers it must be terrible, so sorry :D I'll try to be more accurate next time :thanks:
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Hiro-Akemi Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Glad to hear and I look forward to it. :]
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KoRNFreekz Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
it has so very deep meaning. very like this
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you very much!
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MOVINGPICTURES1981 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
So deep :omg:
Love the song :meow:
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