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I could count eighty seconds in a minute
just seeing you
and they were not enough.
I could look into your eyes more than
a mother could look at her children
and it was not enough.
I could write seventy poems about your smile
and they were not enough.

I'm afraid you laugh.
I'm afraid you lie.

I've been waiting for this for long.
I've tried to show you my heart, my dreams, my soul,
my life.

I don't know what else to do.
I don't know how to say it.
I don't know what word to use.

But if you don't love me,
I can't do much.
If you don't feel the sun each time I say your name,
then I can do nothing.
If you think I'm just a friend,
then I can't insist.

I really believed you thought of me
everytime I had to go.
I really thought you needed me so much when you cried,
when I stroked your cheeks.
I thought you were my soulmate,
my dream, my girl, my all.

I might say sixty times 'I love you'
and you wouldn't move a finger for me.
I might give you the sky
and you wouldn't fly over my clouds.
I might cry
and you'd keep your heart tied so far from me.

You say you don't love me,
you just call it 'passion'.
And I thought I was giving you all.
I thought I would get your reaction.
I thought I was wining your love.
I just lost.
That's my song.
That's my nature.
The nature of a guy that was born to fight
against  the wall of your heart,
the wall of your fears,
the wall of my sins.

You might take the risk of knowing how much I have for you,
but maybe it's true,
maybe I have nothing for you,
maybe my treasures
are a kind of wealth you don't want,
you don't care,
you don't need.

Forgive me for putting my soul on your hands,
Forgive me for crying like a fool, like a kid,
Forgive me for trying my best,
pretending you could love this man,
this silly guy you once called your Sun,
this silly guy that will love 'till the end.
I was going to sleep and an idea came to my mind so I just wrote this listening "Claire de Lune" by Debussy.

It'd be nice you read it listening that piece.
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chedo18 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012
When ever i read your writing I feel like your speaking to everyone, not just the image in the story. That really why I enjoy reading your writing.^^
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Awwes! I'm glad you find that in my poems.
I try to put a piece of me and old experiences there :hug::thanks:
You're so nice.
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chedo18 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012
Your welcome. thank you!
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Student General Artist
:hug:
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rakashael Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your work always makes me think about the world differently. It helps me to be more open minded. :heart:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Awwes! It means a lot to me! :hug::thanks:
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rakashael Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your work means as much to me. ^^
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Aussie-Blonde Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012
the master is back in action with his talent!
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconcuddleplz: ur so nice.
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Aussie-Blonde Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
:iconhug1plz: awwwwwwwwwwww thank u and so are U..
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