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I could count eighty seconds in a minute
just seeing you
and they were not enough.
I could look into your eyes more than
a mother could look at her children
and it was not enough.
I could write seventy poems about your smile
and they were not enough.

I'm afraid you laugh.
I'm afraid you lie.

I've been waiting for this for long.
I've tried to show you my heart, my dreams, my soul,
my life.

I don't know what else to do.
I don't know how to say it.
I don't know what word to use.

But if you don't love me,
I can't do much.
If you don't feel the sun each time I say your name,
then I can do nothing.
If you think I'm just a friend,
then I can't insist.

I really believed you thought of me
everytime I had to go.
I really thought you needed me so much when you cried,
when I stroked your cheeks.
I thought you were my soulmate,
my dream, my girl, my all.

I might say sixty times 'I love you'
and you wouldn't move a finger for me.
I might give you the sky
and you wouldn't fly over my clouds.
I might cry
and you'd keep your heart tied so far from me.

You say you don't love me,
you just call it 'passion'.
And I thought I was giving you all.
I thought I would get your reaction.
I thought I was wining your love.
I just lost.
That's my song.
That's my nature.
The nature of a guy that was born to fight
against  the wall of your heart,
the wall of your fears,
the wall of my sins.

You might take the risk of knowing how much I have for you,
but maybe it's true,
maybe I have nothing for you,
maybe my treasures
are a kind of wealth you don't want,
you don't care,
you don't need.

Forgive me for putting my soul on your hands,
Forgive me for crying like a fool, like a kid,
Forgive me for trying my best,
pretending you could love this man,
this silly guy you once called your Sun,
this silly guy that will love 'till the end.
I was going to sleep and an idea came to my mind so I just wrote this listening "Claire de Lune" by Debussy.

It'd be nice you read it listening that piece.
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chedo18 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012
When ever i read your writing I feel like your speaking to everyone, not just the image in the story. That really why I enjoy reading your writing.^^
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Awwes! I'm glad you find that in my poems.
I try to put a piece of me and old experiences there :hug::thanks:
You're so nice.
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chedo18 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012
Your welcome. thank you!
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Student General Artist
:hug:
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rakashael Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your work always makes me think about the world differently. It helps me to be more open minded. :heart:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Awwes! It means a lot to me! :hug::thanks:
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rakashael Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your work means as much to me. ^^
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Aussie-Blonde Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012
the master is back in action with his talent!
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconcuddleplz: ur so nice.
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Aussie-Blonde Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
:iconhug1plz: awwwwwwwwwwww thank u and so are U..
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Student General Artist
No problem! :iconsmilieplz::rose:
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carol137 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really nice.
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks a lot! :thanks:
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BloodMoonEquinox Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Student General Artist
:tighthug: So sad but touching too :saddummy:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Student General Artist
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Felixuta Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is very touching :tears:
Mind if I call you Marcy? :blush:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Awwes! Thank you, my friend! :thanks:
Sure u can call me as u want, but 'Marcy' doesn't sound too manly hahah .... :D :tighthug:
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Felixuta Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome!:D
YAY!
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Rhainbeaux Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
Wow, this is beautiful! <3
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you so much, sweeetie! :thanks:
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alivethroughart Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Your writing always makes me emotional Marcello - I know these feelings, I know these tears - your words are so emotional and heartfelt - exactly how it feels to realize that you can't make someone love you if they don't even though you give your heart, soul, life - this is so good - I love this poem - wow! - Judy :tighthug:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you, Judy, for reading!
I'm glad u support also my poems.
I'm glad u identify feelings there too ::hug::thanks:
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BlueStarSerenity Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is unbelievably beautiful!!!! the way you have been able to capture the sorrow and saddness all intertwined into this wonderful passage of writting... brilliant work! you inspire us all!
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Awwes! Thank you so much, hunny!
I'm really glad u like this one :hug:
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BlueStarSerenity Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're most welcome!! :hug:
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epic-setter666 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
OOO I KNOW THIS SONG!!!!! its a great peice, its so gorgiouis i could listen to it for hours.

knowing is half the battle. for love to be truly real one must believe it is there and hold it to the other. hand in hand you must enjoy and experiance this feeling of completeness and tranquility. If one were to break this bond all will crash down like rain. The peices of love will drop to the pavement and be forgotten. It will never have existed or been. Therefore hold on and try. Soon all will become clear.
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Awwes, my friend u say it so nicely :huggle:
I love u! :aww:
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epic-setter666 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
lol i try to xD
i know u do its pretty hard not to love me xD lol jk im not that self centered xD
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nataroque Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:saddummy: pretty but sad, and yet beautiful... so is the song.. wonderful job cello
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you, hunny!
I'm glad u liek this one, ur so lovely.
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nataroque Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
daww no problemoo it was brillinat as flippin always :iconiloveitplz:
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Saeleth Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
It's very beautiful, so touching...
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Student General Artist
:hug: thank you so much! :aww:
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Saeleth Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012
You're always welcome Marcello! ^__^
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mj-magic Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
very touching words! :heart:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks a lot, hunny! :hug:
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mj-magic Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're very welcome! :hug:
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Mayeaux Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is an exceptional well written poem!:)
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you so much, man!
I really appreciate it!
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Mayeaux Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You so welcomed my friend!:)
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JannieTheBlackWidow Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's sad and touching as always, I really like the emotions you put into your poems, dear! :aww:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you, darling!
It means a lot u find that in my poems! :aww:
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JannieTheBlackWidow Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're so welcome as always dear ^^ :hug:
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HelenaSamshuk Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
this is great! I have read, fully plunged into this work, you're a wonderful person! I love you!)
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you so much! :aww:
I'm really glad you like this one!
You're so nice!:blush:
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HelenaSamshuk Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
love u!!
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Student General Artist
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HelenaSamshuk Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012
=************
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