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So unfair, you say.
And it seems I don't love you as you want.
You're there looking at me with eyes of Heaven
And I'm so cold like Dante's Hell,
like the soul of a man that loved so much
but never trusted again.

So unfair, you say.
And my lips don't taste as yours.
My kisses are salted like a rock,
like my sweat, like my thoughts.
And you want me to love you.
And you want me to feel.
And you want me to be...
yours... and it's hard.

It's hard to be as you dreamed of me.
It's hard to love without heart.
It's hard to live as I'm not.
It's hard, just hard.

No, please, don't cry!
Don't cry, my love!
Don't say I'm mean.
Don't say I'm cruel.
Don't say I lied.
Don't say you'll die
if I leave you,
if I stop calling you "my life",
if I see you for last time,
if I go and you're not there,
if a 'bye'
is the worst word I can say.

I'll understand if you don't want to hug me.
I'll understand if you don't want to take my hand.
I'll understand everything you do
'cause you know that you lost me.
'cause I know that I lost you.

I told you I wasn't that perfect.
I told you I'm fool.
But my words weren't just words.
And my feelings were so true.
But, Love, I'm a man,
so weak, so weird, so confused,
so bad, so sad, so unfair.

And I'm here, that's me
without love,
without you.
Some of my friends ask me about the girl I use to write in my poems. Well, My poems don't represent an actual situation.

I just listen Chopin, Debussy, Bethoven and Bach and then they make me think of love stories of mine. So I use to mix them and try to express commonexperiences we lived once.

(I'm still working in commissions, but I felt like writing :blushes: )
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bella-katniss-2555 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is amazing and i agree Debussy is great inspiration
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks so much! :aww::thanks:
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bella-katniss-2555 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
my favorite is clair de lune. what about you?
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KobiArt Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Student Photographer
Sometimes when you just got to write, you just got to write. This time, I'm glad you did. :D
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you so much, my friend! :hug::thanks:
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TristessaArt Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011
Me like it :thumbsup: You use simple words but they means a lot and speak to the people. Well done :clap:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2011  Student General Artist
:iconsmilieplz: thank you so much, hunny! :aww:
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TristessaArt Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2011
You're welcome! :)
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patmp Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Intenso... Me encanta.
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Student General Artist
Me alegra que halles intensidad en este poema :aww:
Muchas gracias!
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patmp Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
De nada! ;-)
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zelda17 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
i hav no idea why but this reminds me of my friends well some of them
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Student General Artist
:confused: how so?
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zelda17 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
jus coz som ov my friends are bf and gf and it reminds me wen i fall out with one of my friends (which is a boy) if you want me to explain it more jus send me a message or somthing
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ObliviousDoll Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I cried when I read this because I'm the person on the other side of this. I've had this said to me..And god it is just so hard.

Wonderful work. Fav'd.
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you so much!:thanks:
I'm really glad you like what I wrote here but
at the same time I know how u feel and so sorry you have to pass for this. *hugs*
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ObliviousDoll Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw you're welcome and it's no problem. Sometimes you have to be told a thing or two you don't want to hear in order to come back to reality. ^^;
-Hugs back- But thank you.
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2011  Student General Artist
:iconfur14: :hug: No problem!
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sparrowsong83 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sad but pretty and full of heart. Nice work!
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you so much! :iconsmilieplz:
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sparrowsong83 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome!
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BloodMoonEquinox Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student General Artist
:iconsadcplz: Aww, so sad but so beautiful too--I think this is one of your best poems! :huggle: Good job! :clap:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student General Artist
I'm glad you like it, hunny! :hug:
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BloodMoonEquinox Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Student General Artist
:iconhugpileplz:
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sallymalene Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You are so good at getting others also yourself to feel something strong, with what you wrote!:nod:
It is absolutely amazing as always! :hug:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks a lot, Malene!
Writing is one of my hobbies too :huggle:
It's like playing piano to me. :meow:
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sallymalene Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You are so welcome, as always!:tighthug:
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DariaGALLERY Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
good werds......really good werds
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student General Artist
:hug:
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DariaGALLERY Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
:blush:
:hug:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student General Artist
I'm going to take breakfast, hunny! :hug:
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DariaGALLERY Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
=)
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JannieTheBlackWidow Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So beautiful, my dear!
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student General Artist
:tighthug:
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nataroque Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
well this one is the best one I've read so far by you, I do believe <3
love it a lot.. it's really really powerful

WOOH GO WRITING!..... ^^;
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student General Artist
:iconhugplz: You're so nice, my friend!
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TriciaS Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
Your words are simple ,clear and your thoughts profound...All together they make such a clear ,thoughtful picture....this time sad...but not always:D....!So good to read!:clap:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student General Artist
:iconawwplz: I'm glad you like this poem, my friend.
I'm afraid of wirting in english but sometimes it lets me
express myself in a raw way. :hug:
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TriciaS Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
You mean that your poems are more complex if written in your own language....:nod:I can see what you mean...Your English is so good I forget that it is your second...or third language:D
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2011  Student General Artist
awwes! :iconsweethugplz:
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Saeleth Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
Very sad. Very beautiful. As always ^_^
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student General Artist
:iconawwplz: Thanks, my friend!
I'm really glad you like it. :thanks:
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Saeleth Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
You're welcome! ^__^
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alivethroughart Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
WOW - this is so good Marcello - your poetry really makes me know the feelings you describe - your words are beautiful and heartfelt - whew - I really love it! :iconsadnessplz:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks so much, Judy!
I'm glad you like this poem. :thanks:
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alivethroughart Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
:tighthug: I really love it - it's better than good
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RainySkyz Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011   Writer
:tears: So moving, especially at this moment in time when I was feeling really sad. :heart:
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student General Artist
I'm glad you find this poem touching.
I hope you feel better, my friend! *hugs*
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AWickedShade Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
So beautiful
So emotional
So sad....:(
It made me cry....:hug:
The most beautiful poem I've read ever....
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SILENTJUSTICE Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student General Artist
:( I know it's a sad topic.
But I really felt like writing it.

I'm really glad you like it :hug:
Thank you so much!:thanks:
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