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December 17, 2011
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So unfair, you say.
And it seems I don't love you as you want.
You're there looking at me with eyes of Heaven
And I'm so cold like Dante's Hell,
like the soul of a man that loved so much
but never trusted again.

So unfair, you say.
And my lips don't taste as yours.
My kisses are salted like a rock,
like my sweat, like my thoughts.
And you want me to love you.
And you want me to feel.
And you want me to be...
yours... and it's hard.

It's hard to be as you dreamed of me.
It's hard to love without heart.
It's hard to live as I'm not.
It's hard, just hard.

No, please, don't cry!
Don't cry, my love!
Don't say I'm mean.
Don't say I'm cruel.
Don't say I lied.
Don't say you'll die
if I leave you,
if I stop calling you "my life",
if I see you for last time,
if I go and you're not there,
if a 'bye'
is the worst word I can say.

I'll understand if you don't want to hug me.
I'll understand if you don't want to take my hand.
I'll understand everything you do
'cause you know that you lost me.
'cause I know that I lost you.

I told you I wasn't that perfect.
I told you I'm fool.
But my words weren't just words.
And my feelings were so true.
But, Love, I'm a man,
so weak, so weird, so confused,
so bad, so sad, so unfair.

And I'm here, that's me
without love,
without you.
Some of my friends ask me about the girl I use to write in my poems. Well, My poems don't represent an actual situation.

I just listen Chopin, Debussy, Bethoven and Bach and then they make me think of love stories of mine. So I use to mix them and try to express commonexperiences we lived once.

(I'm still working in commissions, but I felt like writing :blushes: )
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bella-katniss-2555 Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is amazing and i agree Debussy is great inspiration
SILENTJUSTICE Dec 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks so much! :aww::thanks:
bella-katniss-2555 Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
my favorite is clair de lune. what about you?
KobiArt Dec 28, 2011  Student Photographer
Sometimes when you just got to write, you just got to write. This time, I'm glad you did. :D
SILENTJUSTICE Dec 28, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you so much, my friend! :hug::thanks:
Me like it :thumbsup: You use simple words but they means a lot and speak to the people. Well done :clap:
SILENTJUSTICE Dec 24, 2011  Student General Artist
:iconsmilieplz: thank you so much, hunny! :aww:
You're welcome! :)
patmp Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Intenso... Me encanta.
SILENTJUSTICE Dec 18, 2011  Student General Artist
Me alegra que halles intensidad en este poema :aww:
Muchas gracias!
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